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OrientedDis.. Disoriented.


Thursday, January 24, 2002

hehe, don't laugh at my poetry. :Þ I was inspired partially to write this after reading a poem by Billy Collins called Piano Lessons (which is taped on the wall near my computer w/ other special poems). Anyway, I try to write my poems as quick as possible so that I don't lose the feelings I have at that very moment and distort it with other stuff that wasn't there when I first began writing it (in the effort of making it sound 'deep'.. heh, I don't try to do that). The poem below I wrote very quickly, and I might as well just say what hte idea is behind it since I'm not sure people might get it.. basically.. having to do with the talent show I'm in tonight (playing the piano), and the poem is in a metaphor form.

Ivory Tones

There's nothing left to work on,
only hours before that blue light will be on me..
shining over and around me
as if it were beckoning me to heaven.

It will only be me and ivory tonight
working it
like two argumentive couples..
me pleading for it to just
take me away from it all
and carry me off into a dream,
but it won't come that easy.
It will have to be pampered like a baby,
and only after I have given all my trust over
will it be coaxed to take me away
and allow my fingers to brush with swiftness and speed
across its territory.

My teacher tells me
to play with all my soul,
and that this night
won't be about the people..
it will be about conveying a message from my heart
to the tips of my fingers,
pouring out onto each key
blessed with my touch
melting into a warm harmony
coming to a rest with a tired,
but confident,
sigh.

Tonight I ask for brilliance.
Take my gut and step on it -
there is no room in my body for doubt
when I yearn to be filled by ivory tones.
Tonight it's just me and ivory, out on the most romantic date of our lives.

. . . babbled Lin